One of the best experiences I have ever had. 07/16/2023
Rewritten Version
Yesterday, I took participated in an event that adults who once worked in Silicon Valley were invited. Although I am not even an adult and just a university student, I was able to attend the event because thankfully, my predecessor of DVC, Mr. Koudai Yasuda, informed me.
Since people besides me are so knowledgeable and skillful, I was so nervous and anxious at first. (In the event each participant had to bring one wine bottle, but I’m still 19, so I brought a bottle of coke instead. Some of them who didn’t know my age were little confused.)
After I put my bag, I entered a room that many smart people have already started talking, and of course I didn’t know any of them. I was alone for a while.
Chat GPT Version
Yesterday I had the opportunity to participate in an exclusive event specifically organized for former Silicon Valley professionals. Despite being a mere university student and not yet an adult, I was fortunate enough to attend thanks to the kind notification from my predecessor at DVC, Mr. Koudai Yasuda.
Everyone around me, excluding myself, was highly cultured individuals who
Original Version
Yesterday, I took participated in an event that adults who once worked at the Syllicon Valley were invited. Although I am not even an adult and just a university student, I was able to attend the event because thankfully, my predecessor of DVC, Mr. Koudai Yasuda, informed me of the information.
Since people besides me are so knowledgable and skillful, I was so nervous and anxious at first. (In the event each participant had to bring one wine bottle, but I’m still 19, so I brought a bottle of coke instead. Some of them who didn’t know my age were little confused.)
After I put my bag, I entered a room that many smart people have already started talking, in addition, I didn’t know any of them. I was alone for a while.